Fountain, the

Actors: Abel Jake,Alejandro Kevin,Baker Joe Don,Beasor Terrence,Borgnine Ernest,Clark Blake,Covert Allen,Dante Peter,Deutsch Will,Farley John,Jeff Garlin,Hamlin Harry,Heffernan Kevin,Hill Jonah,Hippler Tom,Comedy,

Opinion on the start of my book ?
Here is the first chapter of my new book haven’t got a title or proper names so i’ve just done this …. whenever i haven’t got a name for the place/person, please tell me what you think and give me input and ideas

Prolouge:
i ran through the wilderness, keeping a sharp eye out for enemies, my surroundings just a green blur that eventually passes me by. I hear a small rustling coming from a bush on my near left; I stop suddenly and swing round with my sword already drawn from my belt. I smelt the air, I could smell someone near. Not human; something more, a demon perhaps? Not in these parts of the woods, more likely a shape-shifter, I